A Helping Hands

I used to love him

so much I'd forget everyone around me for him.

But when i tryied to get up he'd push me down.

He pushed me for the last time,

but when he did you caught me in the mist of my fall.

You held me up.

And now i stand with you.

At your side forever.

And I'll never leave.

Take my hands and hold me close.

And tell me what i need to here...

Author's Note

don't judge me this is my first visual besides facebook

Reviews

[Hi]

Very good poem that you wrote and it shows a lot of emotion too.

[LivingDeath]

Good write, as taylor said many people can relate to this. good job.

[Taylor_Anne_xoxo]

very nice. it's amazing how much feeling you can express through so few words. but i like this poem, a lot of people can relate to it.

[StoryTailor]

AH. I thought it was going to be a sad touching poem. But you surprised me! It wasn't a sad touching poem, it was a happy touching poem. Good job with that! Not many people can catch me off guard. I like this... a lot.
So... good job!

[Texas]

Nice. I actually have song lyrics that are similar. Sad at the beginning but happy at the end. I like that.
-Alex, why was your heart beating so fast?
Nice job, Dakota.

[A]

Very nicely written.

I would have changed a few things around in the beginning, and in the end, but overall, this was a great write.

My heart was beating so fast while reading this.