Learning Waves

My observation and imagination of waves...

Soft patter upon the shore

Little waves pounce and roll playfully

Recede to mother's rumble

Waves foam and crash upon prey

Grown and learned from mother's rumble 

Drag underneath strugg'ling prey

Author's Note

Here is my second poem! It has a lot more form and control than my first one. I know it's not an original type of Haiku. I just picked a subject and made two Haiku paragraphs... Enjoy!!
Another thing: One book said Haikus syllables are 5,7,5 yet another said a Haikus syllables are 7,9,7. So if the rhythm is wrong, sorry... just enjoy the metaphors I suppose :)

Reviews

[Aleyah]

!!! I love this! It's so beautiful. I like this, great job (: