my heart

just a haiku poem i wrote quickly in my spare time

im fine dont worry

 

my heart was a hole

an eternity of dark

my heart was broken

 

i was dead to all

i was cut up and smashed in

betrail from friends

 

no-one knows,inside

because of my false smiles,laughs

my false happyness

 

im fine dont worry

i dont need help,am fine

i am not fine

 

Author's Note

so yeah this is my first attempt at a haiku longer than 1 verse

so please be kind and yeah this is a true story about the past 6 years of my life

i was bullied since year 2 and then i was told i probly wouldnt play rugby again because of my knees and yeah this is about how i feel just thought id let it all out

Reviews

[YesIAmHuman]

This is... wow. I really hope you're okay, and if you're not please don't hesitate to seek help. There are so many people in the world who are there for you, including me. Your poem conveyed a lot of emotion and had a lot of depth, it was really well written. Personally, I am terrible at haikus. This is really wonderful, I can't believe it's only your first attempt.