Finally Free

If I told you I love you would you walk away ? If I told you to hold me would you run away ? If I told you not to hurt me would you laugh in my face ? What if I said I was done ? Would you be glad or realize what you once had ? That at one moment you could have had me. You thought I would never leave, that I was yours no matter what. You'd realize you made a mistake. You took advantage of what you could. Now you want me back, but guess what, I don't need you...

Reviews

[Whiskurz]

It never ends well.....but I'm glad you stood up for yourself.....Good write my friend.......Whisk

[marytownsend]

The title of this poem speaks volumes with the questions asked. I also like the pause at the end, like a challenge waiting to be answered! Great writing!

[khalid]

wonderfully written. i like the spirit of challenge you have shown here, i like how you made the inquiries in the form of simple clear questions. i like how you picked your words..