Novocaine

Novocaine

A Poem by Elizabeth Kerns

His smile makes my heart race
His kiss takes my pain away
While his whispers brighten the day
But his goodbye. . .
It's like novocaine.

© 2012 Elizabeth Kerns


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I like the end to this poem but I wish you could tie in the last line with sensory language. Something like..."His goodbyes / they taste like Novocain."

Posted 11 Years Ago
Nice, short but very honest.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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 Added on July 19, 2012
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Tags: Brighten, kiss, novocaine, numb

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Elizabeth Kerns
Elizabeth Kerns

Terre Haute, IN



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