I want you to listen well

A young mans death leaves his lover behind. Yet, She was the one who left him

Chained by your love,

You have cursed me, 

To stay on earth  for all eternity,

You cry and pray for me to come back, 

But when I try to speak you fight back,

You say I'm dead and gone,

But Ive been here all along, 

I try to touch ,feel and hug, you,

Just to get a frightened warning from you,

Although your slowly leaving me behind,

I have no choice but to see all the new things you try,

New life , new lover , you have found,

Yet your wish was to have me stay around,

I'm the one who gives you the cold touch,

Of what was the warm feeling of our love,

But now that you have grown much,

With a family, a husband, and good luck, 

You are to leave me and die in peace,

Leaving me behind in what was ours,

Your wish was to give me no power,

Even though you have much to go,

I want you to listen well,

I wont let you go

Reviews

[Mikuru]

i like this it's really really good i hope i can write this god someday :)

[Manda]

awww this was so cute but yet so sad! it had a very nice flow to it. it also had a few rhymes along the way =) well done!