Calm Before a Storm

Another assignment =D my challenge was to describe something in nature without giving away what it was.

Their rims are glowing,

the light is fading.

Bubbly black centers are bowing.

 

Still far way, their rumbles cry.

The power is building.

Small flickers of light die.

 

An onward breeze tickles my face.

Trees bow and rustle.

A field becomes a quiet place.

 

The flower pollen is fresh,

strong and clean.

The clouds begin to bunmp and mesh.

 

My eyes flutter close and i lifet up my gaze.

Feeling the calm.

This is where the sky's gift lays.

 

Author's Note

yeah, the set up it weird. but i like it =P

Reviews

[eddie]

very nice you have a few grammer mistakes but it is still really good