Because Of You...

Because Of You...

A Poem by Ari
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The reason why everything is ok.

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Because of you….


Because of you, I am getting help.

Because of you, I am not afraid to be myself.

Because of you, I actually feel loved.

Because of you, I have a reason to get better.

Because of you, I AM getting better.

Because of you, I my scars are fading.

Because of you, I am happy.

Because of you, this poem is really sappy.


Everything is better when I am around you….



© 2013 Ari


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This is really cute, and I enjoyed reading it. Although, I do suggest you comb over your work for mistakes. (I understand that when you read what you wrote, the brain automatically corrects it and that makes it harder to actually pick through.)

Because of you, I my scars are fading. - Did you mean to put the I there?

Anyways, great work! Besides that, there are no complaints.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on November 5, 2013
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Ari
Ari

The Black Parade, IL



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Just that insane teen with too many dreams. -Constructive criticism is the best gift a writer could ask for. -Writing -Singing -Drawing -Cheer -MCR more..

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