I Want To.

                        I want to.

                    I want to sing

                    Not the fancy,

     I want to scream like speakers booming so loud,

       I want to sing away the pain and strain,

 

                    Not the jazz.

                    But the blues,

The melody that turns all our issues into tissues to wipe our tears

            And bandage our ever bleeding wounds,

            The melody that turns scars into stars,

               To concuss a new galaxy free from suffering,

                         I want to

 

                     I want to dance,

                      Not the foreign moves,

                     Not in nudity,

          I want to communicate my feelings,

     And the blast bliss for the suffering,

     We have turned into joy,

 

     I want to drink,

From the fountain of our tears,

The fountain of our nutrition,

Our daily bread,

 

 

Walls say something..

Like the deaf without appendages,

I want to listen, so much as if I had no other senses,

No feel,

No smell,

I want to listen, to my roaring intestines

I want to listen, it is all i can do.

Reviews

[Aethereal]

Now I understand what music for you is all about. Your poem inspire me to use some of your words to write this gift song-poem for you to keep as your own: I used meter and rhyme to make it sing. Sing along:


We Want to Heal

We want to bring
you the real.
We want to sing
songs that heal.

May we ply with speakers booming
where we sing like flowers blooming
chasing sorrows that are looming,
quelling furies that are fuming?

Just drop that jazz,
and bring the blues,
the one that has
the tune that woos;

No razzmatazz,
no complex views.
Bring forth pizzazz
with tender clues.

[Sibusiso Xtdo Gama]

Wow, my Lord Good jesus, you made my night Aethereal. i am glad to have triggered such a good song, it is way better to have as my own this is the best gift i have ever had..i will surely sing along and the song will be onsidered as one of my writtings thanx...your the best.

[Aethereal]

You're welcome! I just wanted to show you what may be done with rhyme and meter. You came up with most of the ideas, and many of the words for this song.

[Bright Ocean Star]

Aethereal, beautiful gift poem...

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the energy and the drive of the poem. It is good to want to dance, sing and scream. Make us feel alive. I like the complete poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Sibusiso Xtdo Gama]

thank you very much Coyote, that is comforting

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoy your thoughts and words.

[Oyindamola Shoola]

this is a really nice poem...you have attached more to music and I love it..

[FireFox9]

Cool and I really like the way you write.

[Sibusiso Xtdo Gama]

thanks fire

[lissalovesyou]

I want to...
Reread this poem over and over again.
Amazing!
Bravo!
lissalovesyou:)

[Sibusiso Xtdo Gama]

thanks lissaloves me:)..

[lissalovesyou]

haha...
that's true

[jamal]

wow what awesome poem!! :) keep it up man!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

wow, this is such a good play on words..."turns issues into tissues"

"listen as if there no other senses"

great concepts conceived here..

You want to listen? well, as readers, we want to listen to your words...

you are so good...so rhythmic....

jacob

[Sibusiso Xtdo Gama]

thanx jacob, thank you verymuch.

[Bright Ocean Star]

I love how the stanzas are designed in a way to make the silouette of a dancing woman.... beautiful.

[Sibusiso Xtdo Gama]

thanx for picking that up, i was waiting fro such a comment. thanx

[Bright Ocean Star]

I had to re-read it again and sink in it's incredible beauty....this one is going into my favorites as well...:)

[Sibusiso Xtdo Gama]

thank you very much, that really builds me.

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Amazing poem, it's very creative, nicely penned.

Kaze~ :-)

[Sibusiso Xtdo Gama]

thanks Kaze...

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your very welcome.