Dear friend

Dear friend...

Oh! So I see the trend.

 

Keep smiling at my betrayal…

Keep boasting with denial…

My mixed emotions will one day blend,

Bleep and blemish until it bleeds, my heart will pound.

I had anticipated before it crash into ashes, like fiberglass,

It crack, creep and fatigue from tendons to tendons, through septum to   infinity…

 

Dear friend, the serpent

 

Yet so tender and yet so slender to seep into my heart,

Like a beaver with your protruding teethes...

Slowly waiting to taste my flesh, my feebleness

Slowly waiting to wound by soul,

And cause permanent perforating wounds,

So deep like furrows of the soil erosion

 

Dear friend, Judas

 

Critical eyes, skinny ears and tongue that dries,

That lies skies tantamount.

Keep the deceit and spare me the receipt

Judas the deceiver, I’ll be Jesus the receiver.

 

Dear friend, the bill of critics

 

One day your critics will turn into lyrics,

But  you will still be my banana friend,

Yellow covers, but deep inside is white ish,

Yellow rubbish, kind of ish

Kind of friend...

 

Dear friend, the demon.

 

Inspired by The black Legends and Aviwe Matandela (at the camp)

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

So powerful.. achingly beautiful.. the words express the pain that a friend can cause.. so much deeper than any enemy... voiced with such strong emotion and rhythm...

[Sibusiso Xtdo Gama]

Thanks for such a deep cutting review Froman, indeed friends can bleed us deep

[maria ( rose)]

Dear friend
this is remarkable...I enjoyed this very much!
maria rose

[Sibusiso Xtdo Gama]

thanx Rose, looking forwad to reviewing your work.

[maria ( rose)]

your welcome,,look forward to seeing you!

[Kyle Lawrence]

I really enjoyed the style of writing in this poem. Awesome work!

[Sibusiso Xtdo Gama]

thanx man.

[Sami Khalil]

A splendid poem that touched on some aspects of religion. Enjoyable to say the least...:).....................

[Sibusiso Xtdo Gama]

than you verymuch

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).....................

[Andrea Mouser]

wow, very unique. keep up the good work!!

[Sibusiso Xtdo Gama]

Thanx Mouser

[Taylor_McCutcheon]

I really liked it. It was very different in your word choices.

[Sibusiso Xtdo Gama]

thanx Taylor..

[A. Amos]

Lord will my friend, I enjoyed the write...

[Sibusiso Xtdo Gama]

thanx for the review and the blessings Amos,

[A. Amos]

Your welcome buddy

[Sibusiso Xtdo Gama]

lord help me grow in writting.