Out of my EyEs

In front of me was a paper and a shaking pen!

My mind set out to scan the extremes

When I look around, out of my eyes I see

Just below and above the sea, I see

 

Ignorance to the C

I see, high moments leading away from the O

Oh no! You see, what makes ice to be nice is the N

The nature of human was never to be DOM

Enough not to see, I have just spelt the word condom

Out of the rest it prevents the random.

Poetry is my kingdom,

my device to see

My eyes nothing but a device to see,

What connects my heart to my soul…

Out of my eyes I see,

even things I was not meant to see,

I see….

 

 

Reviews

[Oyindamola Shoola]

this is a beautiful one...well penned

[Edmond Mashao]

"Poetry is my kingdom, my device to see" "What connects my heart to my soul…" I see a lot of passion in what one does and it is that passion that will get far, far beyond your imagination. All the best man!

[Frontier]

Haha! I love this, it's so unique, I would've never come up with it! So random, ironically, as the thing it describes tries to prevent!

Very imaginative haha

We poets do not wear condoms on our imaginations :)

[Sibusiso Xtdo Gama]

very well frontier we just dive into the emotions and thought, then load with ink...thaks for this review. appreciate

[Taylor_McCutcheon]

Very good! This was very well written. I loved the flow :)

[Emily]

Wow, I don't know what to say! I like it! Well done.

[Sibusiso Xtdo Gama]

thanx.....Emily