Cheating, Beating ,Broken heart!

hello there,

nice to meet you,

oh please dont stop because i walked in on you.

oh no, please keep cheating on me.

WHAT? your gonna stop because your caught.

oh no darlin , you dont have to.

Its just that i WALKED IN ON YOU!

but thats all well and fine.

i never broke you heart. 

But you just broke mine.

Reviews

[Summer'sBreeze]

i love it
the emotions are played just right

[Dove]

I can imagine the pain the narrator was feeling. I truly do hate the fact that people cheat on eachother, it hurts. Fantastic and heartfelt piece.

[~Lizzy♬]

The fact that a boy cheating on a girl is very rude and heartbreaking. I know what the narrator in the poem feels like exactly. The pain, anger, and heartbrokeness that the girl feels is very easily storied.

~Lizzy~