Here I Go

they say if you love someone then you just know

but "they" are so very wrong because my thoughts are like snow

quiet and heavy, but so much at one time

here i am, i am uneasy. 

numbed on yet both sides.

no matter how numb i become,

your words still cut like knives.

it like your words are making my mind commit a simple suicide

my body is so lost

and with it goes my mind.

will someone save me?

or has everyone gone blind?

 please..

im crying out for help,

im running out of time.

will someone save me?

or will i simply die inside?

here i go,

im fading fast.

i never thought that i could not last,

in this cold and brutal world,

you lose things that are close to you.

i was having a blast, but now im through.

im sorry that i held on to hard to our love,

and that our loved is now squished and done.

i never ment to sufficate it ,

but i thought you were my only one! 

so here i go,

please dont mind,

that the girl you once new,

has ran out of time.

Author's Note

please excuse any errors,
sorry if this is confusing at all, i know its sad and depressing,
but the person i love has moved on and its like im sill back at the staring line :(

please comment and enjoy!<3

Reviews

[manifesto]

It's sad, but it's also beautiful. Stay strong, love.

[Team_Jaward_Gale]

love it

[stars are far]

This was so nice ..
great work :)

[Rajwa]

It's Alright time Heals Everything Really U Had A Nice Way od expressing how painfull it is for u .. this feeling many ppl go threw it be strong minded cause time heals everything u just should give time TIME !!

[R J Askew]

Ach, the pain of love! You capture it acutely here. Tis sad and many feel exactly as you describe here.

[Summer'sBreeze]

this is so sad :( and heartbreaking
i'm sorry for your loss
Great poem by the way