My healing heart

My healing heart

A Poem by victoria

i thought that i was done for,
that my heart was cracked forever
i thought i had gone over the edge
right into a black hole, never to see light again.
i thought that i would never heal,
and never be the happy soul.
But...
you came along,
with a heart so kind.
you had enough to fill in mine.
So you took my heart,
taking the pain with it.
but instead of you feeling the saddened pain,
you fell in love,
and helped to heal my heart once again.
You were always that kind of a caring friend.
and now your all mine,
my boo for life
and even if this ends,
my heart will be hole,
and you heart will be broken.

© 2011 victoria


Author's Note

victoria
quick, short, simple, and sweet.
and just to say...
that im flying,
and am totally off my feet =)

10-20-11<333333333 *iloveyou*

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Nice, gentle poem with an optimistic touch. Well done.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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JRB
love found how sweet,nice write

Posted 13 Years Ago


Fabulous poetry sharing with us the floating feeling of cloud 9 and solid love. Glad you've got cupid work'n for ya. That's always good to hear about. :)

Aaron

Posted 13 Years Ago


A poem written from the heart...Very nicely penned...Keep it up!
:)))

Posted 13 Years Ago


very good, the good feeings just jump out of this one

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is nice, you have described the feeling well in a way that it is easy to relate to (:

Posted 13 Years Ago


very good! It really explains how someone would feel after they find that special someone. It also describes my situation now so good job on connecting it it other's lives! I like it!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


nice dude

Posted 13 Years Ago



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