This is what i live for!

This is what i live for!

A Poem by victoria

theres one thing i live for,
its not love
its not family
its not friends
its... the love of the game
_____________________________________

together of apart 
we were friends from the start
through softball we spoke
connected by the heart

the screams of the fans
the smoke we breathed in
the ketchup and dirt stains
those were the games

the wins or the loses 
it never mattered to me.
The homeruns and the fun times
that was true victory

so if someone asked me , what is your dream
i would answer very quickly and say
"i dream what any young athlete dreams..  
to be the best athlete that i can be!"

i do not live for family or friends
i live to be playing
and ill play....
right to the very end.

© 2011 victoria


Author's Note

victoria
ever since i was very young , me and my best friend were head over heals for softball........ its in our blood, and i cant live with out it.

my bestie and softball,....thats what keeps me goin<3


EnJoY!<3

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This poem is full of energy and inspiration, keep it up!

Posted 12 Years Ago


last stanza thats what she said! lmaoo i live to be playing lmaoo sorry had to say it! ok so i love this and SOFTBALL IS OUR GAME WE OWN IT! im glad im one of the things that keeps you going cause your one of the things that keeps me going

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I can definitely relate to this piece, except my sport is soccer. But the wording you chose definitely drew me in and portrayed how I feel about my favorite sport. You did a great job with this and I enjoyed the read. Well done!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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JRB
Mine was volleyball, played beach ball for years with many golden memories and close friends, so i can relate,,,,,nice write

Posted 12 Years Ago


Aw...I love the idea of this poem, "love of the game"...It was interesting and creative...And for me, I find this unique...You seem to be really devoted!
Well done, Victoria! :)))

Posted 12 Years Ago


love it
i love how you show your devotion for softball

Posted 12 Years Ago


It's the same story with soccer with me...so love it!!
And well....your passion and devotion for softball is
superbly conveyed here....
terrific :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Having an event or activity that bonds to friends together and carries them through life with a higher level of self-worth and the feeling of betterment is always a wonderful thing. I felt your poem was a wealth of uplifting energy. Great Ink!

Aaron

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is a beautiful and fantastic poem. the flow is seriously amazing. There are two people in my life and they both are my best friends and they keep me going. Without them I have no clue where I would be... or even if I would be (does that make sense?) anyway this is a great poem and I enjoyed reading it.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on December 19, 2011
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victoria

Wonder Land, RI



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