my nightmare are coming true

my night mares are coming true..

my nightmares are coming true

once again we are finally through

you tore open my heart

and you tared me apart

my nightmares are comeing true

you fell in love with a girl or two

but not me, for im not new

you seem to not have a clue

bout how much pain you have put me through

my nightmare are coming true 

once again we are finally through

you tore open my heart

and you tare me apart

my night mare have come true.. 

Reviews

[stars are far]

This was really well done :)

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Flow that is fantastic, flows off the tongue so effortlessly...and the message in the poem so relatable, fantastic!!!

[sugar]

love it, wickedd goodd

[Boldpen]

Beautiful work of art!
Like I said once, Your flow is just fantastic!
Great job. This once simplicity and mastered expressions touched my heart.
Nicely Penned.