ill be her 1 and only saviour <3

ill be her 1 and only saviour <3

A Poem by victoria

my sister texted me late last night
she told me she wanted to die, get outta the sight
hide from the world
and leave its cold,harsh times behind.

My Best friend texted me last night
anger rageing from the flight
the flight of life, 
and the harsh journey she took
she wanted to go
get away
hide in a nook

My Other Half texted me late last night
she told me she wanted her fear out of sight
she said heart break was simply to much
she wanted to jump of a bridge,
 and never take flight
not even in the cold winter night.

so i replied to this kind hearted child
and said a few words
who made her feel great sorrow
she said i was the only reason she stayed on her feet
and walked away
away from fear
away from the broken heat
away from the bridge that would have stolen her life

i am a savior of my dear sister
i am a savior of my best friend
i am a saviour to my other half
and ill be her saviour till the very end.

© 2011 victoria


Author's Note

victoria
i wrote this very fast, so please excuse the incorrect layout and grammar and spelling ,
thank you and enjoy!

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it tugged my heart and was so so sweet!

Posted 12 Years Ago


I love this

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

thank you love.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Very lovely (: Such a sad feeling everyone goes through at some point in life, it's always good to have that one person who tugs us away from those thoughts! Very nice piece of work, well done (:

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wow...Such a sweet poem filled with love...
You sound so devoted...
:)))

Posted 12 Years Ago


Damn this is good! Great job

Posted 12 Years Ago


Intense, great flowof story from one stanza to another...excellent stuff :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


my goodness this is so powerful and so tugging. Love the emotional read.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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