this used to be our story.... NOT ANYMORE! ='(

this used to be our story.... NOT ANYMORE! ='(

A Poem by victoria

This used to be our story..but not anymore

 

The words are like swards,

Sharp.

Strong.

Painful.

But yet kindly spoken from you’re mouth.

 

One glance…… and I could see, you felt it.

The regret

The pain caused

The torture benieth ..

You tried to change the subject,

Take back the words you had said.

Take back the pain ,

 the torture you have caused.

But…

 

Its to late

 

The blood…seeps out , more and more.

Unstobable.

Unhealable.

Unfair.

 

The swards stabs.

The words cut.

The heart…. Breaks.

The pain seeps.

The girl crys.

And all because you said…

 

I love ________!

     

Hidden undr the  line,

Is the true feelings,

The true care,

The true you.

But its all masked over,

Hidden for your friends to see a mask

Hidden for even the loved girl

 

You told me the truth

You don’t love her

But the thing is

She loves  you.

And I do to..

© 2011 victoria


Author's Note

victoria
this is about me falling for someone, and the loved person loves someone else..
please excuse the spelling errors.
enjoy and comment!

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ugh god didnt need that its too true like all of it... really good write vickyyy

Posted 13 Years Ago


This was beautiful and touching in a sad way, but I enjoyed reading this as I can relate to the emotions a lot.
Well done (:

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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