Mitchell...

Mitchell...

A Poem by victoria

his name popped up on the screen,
at 12:43
the excitment inside
went crazy!
i scremed pressed ok,
to see what he had to say,
but it was something unexpected.
the words stared me down,
like a child had seen a scary clown.
this couldnt be right.
then something caught in my throat, 
and tears streamed down my face that night.

© 2011 victoria


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thats the time he broke up with you? ohhh, this was so sad and ik how it feels for this to happpen. It always seems to catch me by suprise too, guess thats just what boys do!

My favorite line was "like a child had seen a scary clown" great simile.
Remember V im always here for you and when ever you need help you know where to come. Your my best friend and i love you and hate seeing you sad or hurt. I wish i was there when all these situations happened but im not:(

So agian i love you so frigen much and i always will

~stephh~ aka ~wifey~

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on August 21, 2011
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victoria
victoria

Wonder Land, RI



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