angered

angered

A Poem by victoria

do you try to make me feel this way?
or is it just a gift?
i wanted us as friends,
i didnt know it'd come out like this.

you knew i liked him,
so you ran and told him lies!
o didnt know you were like this,
and i still dont know why.

we always used to get along,
now we cant say 2 words
well look around ben,
what do you see?
is it beautiful unicorns?
or reality.

were done ben,
though.
we were never ment to be -
-the perfect two!

© 2011 victoria


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victoria
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love it. And i'm sorry that Ben was such an a*s to you.

Posted 13 Years Ago


i hate ben too, hes an a*s to you and an a*s to me! i didnt know he was like that when i was going out with him untilll i dumped him for rhett. Thats why i was mad when you started going back out with him cause i found out that he was a complete d********g. sorry it had to end up this way for you, i really wish it didnt, i was just trying to protect you when i was telling you to dump him....didnt work out so well i guess. well i love you and sorry for all the s**t that you get put through and for any s**t i put you though.

this was a super poem btw:)

~steph~ aka ~wifey~

Posted 13 Years Ago


I love the first two lines, excellent. Strong beginning and you bring it home at the end.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Wonder Land, RI



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