please lissen

please lissen

A Poem by victoria

im not saying i miss him.
im not saying hes coming back.
im saying...
i NEED him,
CLOSE.
its like he ripped out my heart and ran,
i wanted him to slowly fade away
it would've been so much easier this way.
to let go.
but no,
he ran,
ripped out my heart.
and ran,
and never came back ! 
not even to see if i was gonna be ok! 
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well  i have toughened up,
u cant hurt me anymore,
im stronger,
and got friends to back me up,
u were one person in my life,
u chapter that passed by.

so try,
try to hurt me,
and you'll see why.
why i have toughened up.
and its mostly to say..

GOODBYE!

© 2011 victoria


Author's Note

victoria
sorry this is really bad...
its startes off talking to my friend about my EX -boyfriends,
and ends with me talkina him.
sorry if it makes more sence through a diffrent perspective then all the betteer hahah,
please review and comment, thank you<3

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makes sence to me and yeah you go girl! kick his a*s! and i love you and im always here to back you uppp!

This was great love the last stanza!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


You write from the heart. I enjoyed reading it. I like that at the end, you stand up and take back your power. Excellent.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on August 21, 2011
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victoria

Wonder Land, RI



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