DEAD END

she tells me to say no

she tells me to run

she tells me her thoughts

she tell me what she feels

she misses me

she wants me to come back

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she told me to say no.

I DIDNT LISSEN

she told me to run

SO I RAN TO HIM

she told me her thoughts

SO I THOUGHT MY OWN

she told me her feelings

BUT I FELT FOR HIM

she missed me

I MISSED HIM

she wants me back

BUT... BACK FROM WHERE? IM LOST. IN MYSELF, IN HIM, IN OTHERS. 

"I HAVE REACHED A DEAD END ROAD, HUMMING A TOONLESS SONG"

Reviews

[Becky C Strukamp]

Interesting format. Sounds like a lot of inner turmoil. You penned it beautifully.

[sugar]

grrrrrrr victoria grrrrrrr i read this one after run or stay so now im say grrrrr to you

[victoria]

please comment and tell me your thoughts, thank you! and enjoy