begining or end?

begining or end?

A Poem by victoria

you,
you sufficate me in love,
you say things so i wont run away
you keep me on a chain that no one seems to see
you make me feel like i cant lose you
I
I want to run
I want to break free
I dont like to be in one area , dont you see?
I cant stand this!
I may end it soon
i'm
I'm not happy
i'm not my self
i'm not feeling this anymore
I'm so done
i'm no more fun
she
she sees through my mask,
she sees through the cover
she sees my pain
she wants me better
she knows what i want
she tells me to run
she hates him for the better,
she wants me to be fun
she misses me
i know you want me forever, but we rushed in this dont you see?, im not ready for this, it may be ending , we should have never made this begining 
now i must run,
now i must hide, now i must let it all come outside, outside the mask, outside myself,
im trying to run..... go get help 

© 2011 victoria


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I enjoyed the structure of this poem ~~~
The title is brilliant ~~~
"We should have never made this beginning ( loved that line )
Wonderful poem!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i deleted both the comments i put up because u just told me to forget about this peice and that its nothing

Posted 13 Years Ago


srry for the mistakes,

Posted 13 Years Ago



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victoria

Wonder Land, RI



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