There will never come a day

Poem i wrote when me and my husband were dating in highschool, and broke up.

Its the little things i miss
I just wish you could see
I never really showed it
But they meant the world to me

The look in your eyes
Would always let me know
That when you were holding me
You couldn't stand to let me go

But it seems you have done so.
Now i must say
If you're really happier without me
I'll wipe my tears and walk away.

I treated you so badly
But you always stuck it through
I don't know why I ever
gave up a guy like you.

Promises were broke
But we can put it all in the past
If you give us one more chance.
I know for sure we can make it last.

If you don't want me back
Still, one thing will stay true.
There will never come a day
That ill stop loving you..

Reviews

[Stephen]

Now here I find some truth of your heart which expressing some feelings into the many forms of verbs. You know what? Yeah, I really happens among lovers --- like broke--up and Blah ..blah.. blah ... because they do true love like you do and find misery in last because they forget the meaning of pain getting lost in much happiness of love so, to keep the lovers balanced with life ... such kinda things happen --- just to keep `em in touch of pain and happiness -------- and be remember, Sweety .. Happiness never comes alone in our lives, it comes with misery because misery can never stay away from happiness like a heart can`t stay away from its beats ;)

Nice write, I`ve read your much stuffs today ... and believe me, I find you very creative but honey, your most of the stuffs are very emotional and It`d be honor to me if I ever could get a chance to read your new beautiful peaceful stuffs ---- Keep writing and hey, don`t be sad, i`m sure, with the time, everything`d be settled down out there.

May God Bless You, Sweety! ;)