Thoughts

A short little poem, kinda.

So many thoughts racing through my mind

Racing and pacing, spinning round in circles

It's making me dizzy, I feel like i'm falling

Wrapped up in all the who's and the what's

to the where's and the why for's.

Reviews

[Bare Trees]

To quiet the mind is a feat in itself. I remember long ago having that feeling like a plane spinning down to earth, out of control.

[Xochipilli]

It's quite chaotic, honestly.

[Naomi Montana Walsh]

I know the feeling..I assume that some may have the sort of mind that rest ..and the kind of feet that feel steady but I have never been that ..that is what writing is good for..well at least for awhile ...then if it has not happened already..it becomes other things like art and music.at least for me it did

[Xochipilli]

It's honestly a bit of everything for me, music, art, reading, writing.

[Jerryyoung1z]

Sometimes one can't just block 'em out, the good, the bad and the ugly just come flooding in. It's left to us to sort, arrange, pick and expand on the positive ones....easier said than done.

[Xochipilli]

True, very true.