The Invisable Love

The Invisable Love

A Poem by Xillie
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Another poem about a love that seemed to good to be true. Maybe some instincts should be trusted... The story behind this one is a Guy (obviously) who just couldn't be himself around me... so it was hard to tell if he was being compleatly honest with him

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The Invisable Love

 

Why can't i see you?

I guess he lied

Do you even exist?

Or do you just hide?

It's hard to tell

Or even say

What is it about you

That makes me feel this way?

There is no proof

that you even said "yes"

Just a hope

Maybe a guess...?

© 2008 Xillie


Author's Note

Xillie
Once agian, Just be honest.

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I loved this one. Looking for the love you know is out there. not knowing if it will come to you.
Bring more.

Raven Malak

Posted 16 Years Ago


Very good one. Hoping to find the love you want but not knowing if its there.

Keep them coming

Lilith

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on August 12, 2008

Author

Xillie
Xillie

Benton, MO



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I'm am a writer, obviously. Poetry is my first love, but i'm also trying some short stories.... more..

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