Just For You

Thank you to the girl who made me write like this again :)

The flowers are in bloom...
      and so are you
So much so the sky will open up...
      just for you
And angels will come rushing out...
      looking for you
For you have something they own...
      yes it is true

A smile so beautiful;
      painted with an angelic hue
A smile lovely enough,
      to make me chase after you...

But the angels will return empty-handed,
      will cry adieu!
            for no one can ever take
                  that sweet, angelic you

Reviews

[Kho-San]

Wow, it is strange that you should write such a poem, for the smile of just such a girl has only recently captured my heart too, one whose smile was indeed
'so beautiful;
painted with an angelic hue'
It is a beautiful poem, and reflects the beautiful emotions just such a girl creates within ones chest. Thank you for this beautiful poem, it has touched me on a personal level and greatly warmed me (after coming to this poem feeling rather sad after reading your previous poem.)

[Linda alexander]

But the angels will return empty-handed,
will cry adieu!
for no one can ever take
that sweet, angelic you

Great write, splendid imagination, admiration to the girl, clear expressions, simile is perfect to the ocasion, really enjoyed