Alone

Sad time

ALONE

SITTING HERE 

FIRE BLAZING

ALL ALONE

TEARS DWELL IN MY EYES

AS THOUGHTS DRIFT 

TO WAY BACK THEN

LIFE'S BEEN SUCH A SURPRISE

OH WHY HAVE I HAD TO ENDURE

SO MUCH PAIN, SO MANY LIES

FAMILY I HAVE, BUT I DONT KNOW

BROTHER ON THE STREETS

OF AMSTERDAM, SISTER SO SWEET

HIPPI MUM ON THE RUN

MY FATHER DIED WAY TO YOUNG

BY THE BARREL OF A GUN

I HAVE TRAVELLED 32 HOURS FROM HOME

I AINT HURRYING BACK

TO MY OBSESSED BOYFRIEND 

WHO HAS ALL MY THINGS 

AND MY CAT.

BUT LIKE I SAID

I AINT RUSHING BACK

SMALL TOWN

CALLS MY NAME

LIFE WONT EVER BE THE SAME

I FEEL I SHALL STAY

ALL ALONE

Reviews

[Chiradeep Patra]

Lovely poem...

[Patient Poet (Yos)]

love your words tonight :)

[Sami Khalil]

Life's been such a surprise.
Words of truth

[zainul]

Lonely feelings well expressed.
Great write.
Could you rewrite using capital and small letters where appropriate?
I am not sure if you have any special purpose for writing in this manner.

[Ziara]

Thanks very much for your input, I will try and change the format i have no real reason to set it out as i did, I am still learning and just playing around with it. I am glad to have some feedback.