Fade to Black

A simple "feel good" kind of poem...

When tough times get you down,
Shed the weight that keeps you bound
Return to those who raise you up
Do things that you like and love
Let go of your insecurity
Let those bad emotions sink into obscurity
Never let yourself come under attack
Just let all of that negativity fade to black...

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Marshall]

It certainly has that subtle message and desire to change things. The message is the important aspect.
The rhyme and rhythm are good-but can be tighter with the rhythm scheme. Just a wee bit of surgery will make this poem much healthier.
Its good though. Keep writing.

[Sami Khalil]

"Let go of your insecurity
Let those bad emotions sink into obscurity"

A good uplifting poem. Thank you for sharing...:).....................