Saros O Flexs

Saros O Flexs

A Story by bryce holmes
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( The long tittle is the chapter but there are to be no chapters in this book let me know what you think about this idea.) Being written like a every long article. open to feed back and ideas and so on.............extra 

 

    Eons ago on a sphere of the universe was celestial call Putianta. He ruled a realm so grand and of wonder that he became prideful.

argent that his Father become concerned about his son that he bore.

 

   His off shoot Orcanian would roam the hills valleys and mountains raising his Flemits. When suddenly a lioness came hurrying out of the trees as fast as a mattock hitting the ground at full force. The Uix took his bone sword thrust it into the creatures head. A clean blow muttered to himself has he removed the weapon from the head and then deseeded to harvest the meat and fur to sale your tom barter and the next days market at the city of RieBeon.

 

   Descended from the over hang found his way to his third of the realm of Putianta. Arriving at his fortress on the mountain of Offskil. He sheathed his sword back into his back where it hanged around a rope. The humanoid is about 6/3 in height the thing and devilish looking but rather kind and respectful in soul long ears pointed back toward the setting sun in the background was coming to an end of the day.

 

   As for the fortress dark arch ways with in arch way paths intermingling and interlocking through the first arch was a tower pier of lighted stone lighting up the whole in side. Of the then place and also acting as a stairwell for his people to go up and down has they pleased. In this sphere it is that you were reasonability for your own well fare and your well being. No one cooked in service, no currency to go off of just one simple rule survive on your own and keep the peace in the 

Pruklelf, no laws, no military just individuals living among others who are of the helic and soldiers.

 

   Warriors at the place you were the warrior all focus around the self and getting the best out of the sphere as you could. entering the common room and sitting at his black and green stone and metal throne walking up the stairs to it the throne was carved and shaped engraved into the rock of the mountain. 

sitting down in it thinking the day might be over but the night is just moments; away always have something of the matter always seems to appear and arise out of the blue.

 

   Ghoustic running into the common room and sees the lord sitting. Runs up ways helling come forin archers are burning the fields and forest dell wellings. "Ok calm down" "come with me." running down a path about coming to its end they hop onto a liona and with out on seconds notice they were running fast and flying in the air once they spotted the happening the beings leaped off of the creatures back landed into a field of the years plenty smoke arising from witch way direction couldn't tell using his Quafaya eye looked into the villages outposts and burring surroundings locating the attackers forces. 

 

   He yells to the other in a deep voice go over there on top of that roof and wait until you can see a person then kill them in blind sight I'll do all the short range the one runs to the roof and slays down three then four with the beam ray potion that was mounted at the top of the setting.

 

   Orcan sees a clearing fairly close he runs and jumps into the air whips out shank and massacres 3 of the raiders one of them cutting his figures opened and blood rudely pouring out of them thinking quickly of what to do re injects the same blood to transfuse his genetic make up to do howl ray sticks his sword into the ground then draws a triangle by the sword to detect for life around picked up the signal for 500 people all of course the attackers lost 46 including the sick, children, man and the old decerped, the women of course captured as prisoners of the invasion then mated with for more offspring to benefited them to their use. 

 

   Rapid fire from the roof kept on coming the being waved to the one on the roof to stop firing for the moment so that he could evaluate the situation momentary he got the drawing done in the dirt. Warmed up his right hand putting booth hands in a x shape formation and then as soon as he though light the ray active shattering the fire and smoke around him finally being able to see what's in front of him found the people who he was looking for directed the beam into them and shattered their material bodies into a light on fire burning corps with blue flames cooking them dry not much yelling and moaning, screaming but a great undying peace the 500 were put out of their misery by the Helen of the realm. 

 

   The one on the roof came back over to where the Helen was said nothing and just gave a nod in approval He said send word that I'm fine will return on the morrow but going to cam p here for the time being to night. 

 

   The Ghoustic forward himself to the inkeep with message. While the Helen leaned back closed his eyes to get a slumber in before the first dawn hit the ground ( his eyes re main open its the eye with in it that rests the night.) there fore the calm trickle of the dripping moister off the gunners roof dripping ever so slowly fades into a nothingness that becomes an escapee of the next days plunder.  

 

 

At the Paladin fortress of the dimensional Realm lives the queen of the north and the south. The planet of ArkTar the great one His seven sons of the Fable place of the realm keep of the peace maker place.

Myists goes down to the winter world an plants the life seed that will create the life for the planet that is of which is call Hellma; now the quest for the Quinta begins.

 

Paramoney Apararfa

 

Peace Maker

 

The Imdite getting out of the Aoid enhancer equipping himself with new weapons out from the shelves. ( An Aoid is a slumber lung chamber 

 

It was a hard as can be war with the Anicantia that it would be a ever lasting war between darkness and the light. This is the story.

 

In my old hut in the woods a waterfall flows ever clean and clear that there was a great battle on it that there was blood stains dripping off of the grass bodies on the ground.

 

Inside my old hut poured out an old mug of leaf tart for mine self what a nice drink for the mouth to taste onto and to pour with a moderation that nice to earn and be in enlivenment of coals of the warmth to my back; a fire to tork and re apply wood upon to negotiate a permanent stander for the fire place.

 

Me a Blegon would Just sit and contemplate on whats next on the priority list and so on. 

that can trasmute a soul into a lobby in there mind goes into a atom and then fuses. the atoms and electrons then the neutorns with in the human body that can deliver the old soul into an non orginal soul. that that can goes into an a 12th demensional reality so forth. next into a human body of the souls choosing. A battle and war in it facing to find the life seed through transmutation: Alchemyme, Angelogly, and gunclave smithin, and mintal personality commpassion.

 

" Hey clerk you over there I need help picking out a tool." "yes an ax or a mattox would work." In the space / where the voice lives and speaks out load in the human spacail mind. 

 

" You is it this time !" it said ina booming vioce thinking and making desescions all the time for my muita in the 13th DM ( demansion) 

 

Going back into the lobby of the lobby of the mind as a Soulic with my Mattox Killed a warlock that was trying to get through the blockade of Dinaraeda that are the undead keeps of the Pixa celluar line and so fourth not bad only looks bad to the eye very kind and passionate peoples and a person.

 

Met up with Beo a Pet creature that can be controled by the mind and trained very slowly be the red blood veins the red cells of the human body. So ob trying to breack off the head of my kill. lifted up the head to drink water and blood to as water. A source to stay a live, maybe just may be go to the battlements and throw off some ladder so the my enmey won't be looking up and down. tied down with veins and web like materail.

 

Old wood that can't be drawn by the intellience of the consiness. Flies surrounding the face. The morons of the 13th realm come out of no where a with machine guns and shot ones as well; no honor just bliatatly disrespectful. little to wAS A TOTAL  sluaghter house of 10,000 realms died since having a degree in Volcanoes knowing of How to set one off by omisciences and a punitionay and pure accuracy that the soul may not to be able to return to reality and so on I tell my angel Iimentive To explode that Volcano for the secert to it is being very gentlemenly and asking them to do it for you in such a way that they won't get piss off at you. one second it happens. 

 

Boom done every handler of a gun is a effectively is alienated imminently. just be nice in the 13th realm and even though full when being here in your indualviual mind set. or other wise person will think your a total dusbag will become your worst dark soul they will kill you if that choose to. 

 

Never enter a an winrey or tarven ; becuase a lot of people are not sober but are stright up dumb down drunk a go idea not to be like that person your that guy.       

that can trasmute a soul into a lobby in there mind goes into a atom and then fuses. the atoms and electrons then the neutorns with in the human body that can deliver the old soul into an non orginal soul. that that can goes into an a 12th demensional reality so forth. next into a human body of the souls choosing. A battle and war in it facing to find the life seed through transmutation: Alchemyme, Angelogly, and gunclave smithin, and mintal personality commpassion.

 

" Hey clerk you over there I need help picking out a tool." "yes an ax or a mattox would work." In the space / where the voice lives and speaks out load in the human spacail mind. 

 

" You is it this time !" it said ina booming vioce thinking and making desescions all the time for my muita in the 13th DM ( demansion) 

 

Going back into the lobby of the lobby of the mind as a Soulic with my Mattox Killed a warlock that was trying to get through the blockade of Dinaraeda that are the undead keeps of the Pixa celluar line and so fourth not bad only looks bad to the eye very kind and passionate peoples and a person.

 

Met up with Beo a Pet creature that can be controled by the mind and trained very slowly be the red blood veins the red cells of the human body. So ob trying to breack off the head of my kill. lifted up the head to drink water and blood to as water. A source to stay a live, maybe just may be go to the battlements and throw off some ladder so the my enmey won't be looking up and down. tied down with veins and web like materail.

 

Old wood that can't be drawn by the intellience of the consiness. Flies surrounding the face. The morons of the 13th realm come out of no where a with machine guns and shot ones as well; no honor just bliatatly disrespectful. little to wAS A TOTAL  sluaghter house of 10,000 realms died since having a degree in Volcanoes knowing of How to set one off by omisciences and a punitionay and pure accuracy that the soul may not to be able to return to reality and so on I tell my angel Iimentive To explode that Volcano for the secert to it is being very gentlemenly and asking them to do it for you in such a way that they won't get piss off at you. one second it happens. 

 

Boom done every handler of a gun is a effectively is alienated imminently. just be nice in the 13th realm and even though full when being here in your indualviual mind set. or other wise person will think your a total dusbag will become your worst dark soul they will kill you if that choose to. 

 

Never enter a an winrey or tarven ; becuase a lot of people are not sober but are stright up dumb down drunk a go idea not to be like that person your that guy.       

Going onto the outside and looking at the boat called L'fare. A small down to earth canoe kind of boat and make out of the timber Apple wood and metals from the minds right up the mountains extra. 

 

      Hoisting up the sail the bunch getting into the boat then sailing down the brook now river. seeing the night gloom and the black night shining the way for the wind to calmly and to the whom gently down the PSI glowing waters reflecting off the blue clear waters. 

 

     The fire bugs selecting each and every placement outside of the boat. Seeing the flickering on and off and about the head flying everywhere. 

    

     Once hitting the ocean the story of great grandeur and glory begins. 

 

While sailing on the ocean and seeing the crystal  clear water from the edge of the boat and flying fish hoping out if it. seeing a isle from a distance we desired to approach it confidence and reassurance we anchored on the beach and prepared and cooked food over a fire pit then slumbered for the night in there was a forest.

 

    In the morning we were soaked up to are chests in water from the waters high tide and moved to the forest and on this island was a volcano it was a new island that just formed. re set it up for the day. Once the night hit we together as a team went into the forest and looked about in side. 

 

    In was your regular forest but when a ragging cat comes leaping out of the brush Ulmo with his spear stabbing the cat until the male bleed out exceeding out and slew to a perfection that the giant cat cannot moved any more.

 rejection the spear.

 

    Taking off the fur and putting it on the ground and at a rest. The spear at the ground in a relaxed ease. 

 

Climbing up on a tree to see more of the island and are surroundings seeing the beauty in the leaves like the reds and the greens and yellow. Seeing the wrinkles and the vines and the morning dew leaking off the edges off the leafs and leaflets.

 

     Descending down the tree and seeing the branches seeing the ground. My spear where I left it in the ground we went up some more when in the distance saw a fortress.     

Crossing the water of the solid bridge and entering through the bridge gate and seeing nothing inside it an NathanO sees an dragon lying on one of the battlements. All red and green and big claws as pikes and spears would not want to awake it up from its deep slumber and the three go straight in the throne room.  

 

Saw a vek undead sitting at the hilled throne of vines and said "what do you want." looks like you are trespassing onto me fortress and then a hundred fold came out off the walls and awoken. The green and red dragon anodized and angered from the situation. 

 

Being startled be the dragon and the madden raging crowd. arrows were flying and and undead came to Ulmo stabbing him in the shoulder and wounding him and him saying in agonizing pain breathing out deeply and taking out the spear and threw some dirt on it to temperately to stop the bleeding and the sizing up.

 

   

 

   Blegon thinking of something to do in order to defend I'm self  with his sword and stabbed one of the undead through the head and the undead yelling "you did it!"

 

and being vanish in an instant from the throne room and NathanO and Ulmo finishing off the rest of the undead in the surrounding area and taking out the spear in one of them.

 

and continuing to the Blanche and doing a rough scan of the area and see nothing but the slain laying about on the ground.   

 

And then sending them through a portal back to the main land. Then summoning a Army from the dead to invade the fortress of fire to the due west.

 

Once arrived there in full commufluges we attacked at the nights fall. It was not with coward ness though but with an honor chaivery 

Was the most of an action there.

 

Taking a machine gun from a armored vehicle. Then decided to shoot couple of humans seeing the bullets flash and then going inside of the human body then watching it stick inside 

Of it.

 

Thanks to the modern weaponry we slew over 1,000 fold in the afternoon as well to hiding behind bushes and concrete rumble. Then approaching the gate of the fortress. I let my companions lower down the draw bridge over the Mott and another thousand came running out of the open. 

 

Slew them but with a regular old fashioned spear. Stabbed them about five for starters.

Then bodies lying all around outside of the fortress and onto the draw bridge. 

 

We moved very slowly watching out for arrows and for rife fire. Ducking and dodging them from every direction. 

 

Back on the island after winning the battle with the undead. Once again cooking up a storm with some meat and fish and then slumbering until the next morning.

 

Starting up in conversation the next dawn Ulmo then Blegon wakes up and sees Ulmo starring off into the horizon. Watching the sunrise arise. 

 

 

“ It’s is a pretty sight.” “Yes indeed it is.” Replided Ulmo. 

 

I’m just contemplating on what is next to are quest. Once everything awoke, we packed up camp and pushed the boat back into the sea. 

 

 

Once The three were again in the boat. We’d better try and find some land. So that we can re supply and re get food and of course coffee to sooth the transitions of the body. 

 

Two days passed and only eating fruit and nuts drinking a rum ale that NathanO provided from his old hut. Floating on the waves coasting over and under them majesticly 

 

A whale comes out of no where and slash’s water onto the deck of the boat Days of sailing goes by an then finally see a massive boat in the distance. Fishing boats and a port comes into view once we were docked at the port. 

 

We got off to only to see people of races of all sorts. At the port unpacking and loading up barges to set sail to distant lands.

 

They started talking to the people out at the port to find out, of what land they were in.

“You’re in the realm of Mara ruled by the mistress Yanila warrior queen.” Said a loader 

 

Heading for the town NathanO and Blegon and buying of what little coins that they had. getting smoked fish and more ale for the boat. The three decided to go into a tavern for some refreshment and food they did eat in peace they drank some liqueur in modestly not to heavy that they turned out to be drunk. 

 

A person at the bar was like "I hate you." and threaded to kill Ulmo then Ulmo takes out his spear an stabbed the human through the heart. Everyone at the bar just continued as usual in a regular fashion. It was a calm and quiet night, they went out of the tavern and watched the swaying boats in the port anchored down just swaying back and fourth like a rocking chair.

 

Seeing the fish being sold in the market. Getting what they needed from the market and refreshing from the warm pools of the city Blegon seeing a flyer for the service for the queen. 

 

Grabbing it off the pole and running it too the other two who where sitting at a table with a bottle of Ale.

 

“ Look at this guy’s it looks like an opportunity for the queen that we can take.” 

 

Looking at it carefully over. They decided as a group to pass and continue to there nearest island to transmute into another demension.

 

Getting back into the ship and not looking back to the land sailing on the open sea. The three lowered the anchor and swam with the fish and diving down and seeing the rainbow colors reflecting off the water. 

 

Legendary fish and creatures beyond a regular humans comprehension. They came flying out of the oceans surface. 

 

Returning to the ship’s protection and raising up the anchor to continue the quest to the transmutation island to transmute into another demension. 

 

Finally arriving at the isle looking at it with glee and determination. Docking at the shore and getting off of it and walking towards the green hills and looking at the Transmutation temple walking up the path to it. 

 

Once in side and lying down on a chamber mats all placed in a hexagonal shape. Leaving there bodies at the temple and everything became a blur and with that everything became green. 

 

The angel Lucifer saying “ I repent” to the Arch angel Michael a while he was bonded in chains an asking “ I’ll do anything. From going to hell and being vanished into nothing in existence.” 

 

Well that being your case you can re pay your debts to repay of what you and your servant the devil Benoca.” 

 

“Your mission onto earth is to switch in and out of bodies to find the evil and ideals of death that you implanted into each and every human.” 

 

Where to look that is for you to search and to seek.” Replied the arch angel Michael watching the hell fire circling around him. 

As well as hearing him yell. 

 

Calmer and calmer it came into a great silence. Waking up in a body and then upon meeting Ulmo Blegon and NathanO on the Earth dimension. 

 

Began the solve the problems of all evil and to find the spark of life. Reading of of the map and getting a blinking signal on the map. Seeing it at a hotel. 

 

Approaching the hotel but first rode the bus to the destination getting off the bus and entering the hotel off of the street. 

 

Once inside it and locating it before they entered the hotel lobby they started the climb to the spark and got to it they broke down the door to find that a darken spirit inside the room. 

 

Sealing it and devouring it into its grand nothingness. Lucifer shooting the spirit with a green ray blast of energy. The spirit reflecting it back at him in the face breaking a window in the process. 

 

Seeing the chard’s of glass laying on the floor. Temporary wounding the spirit in the process. 

Once killing to fully the darken spirit blood ousting the spirit then vanished into the blue and was then dead.

 

And achieving the spark of life went out and transmuted out of the human bodies and back to the seventh demension where the peace marker resides.

 

Once finishing teaching at the university for volcanology then getting to a room to switching bodies in order to meet the people at the temple. 

 

To put the spark back into the pentagon. Once again the spark was reestablished back in its place. 

 

                     The peace maker 

Thank them for their services they went back to the Transmutation temple and went into a forever deep slumber. Only to be awaken in case of a great need of service. 

 

                             The End 

 

 

Bryce   

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One long article is a no go for me. Chapters exist for many reasons, first and foremost to give the reader a sense of progressing through the story. Clearly you are very imaginative but I think you have to keep the person reading in mind too. Most of this is nonsensical. Slowly introduce your reader to the world that you are creating. This is baptism by fire. Words I've never heard before being thrown at each other with no real context. And then many of them are never used again. What is a 'Flemitis'? Is (a slumber lung chamber) supposed to mean something to me. And that example was literally supposed to be the explanation of what something (An aiod) was. You've got to ease me into your mind here, I have no idea what I just read. Somebody wrote a letter? Something, something the devil made an undead army? They killed him with... a broken window? No his reflection in a broken window? The dead are dead again? Yeah somebody won!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Very imaginative. Well done!!

Posted 4 Years Ago


It has been a long time coming trying to find people and to have finally written something worth while and to come together to create something like a story of some sort my this story be entertaining and enjoyable to people I'm not about the money I'm for the art of writing its self.

Posted 4 Years Ago


I think you've read too much James Joyce, William S. Burroughs, and Gregory Corso- either that or you're feeding a computer algorithm some heavy duty drugs. Either way, and just in case this is just the way your brain works let me say this: Well played. The complete disregard for form, structure, and grammar combined with coined words, fractured symbolism and a healthy dose of utter nonsense succeeds in being entertaining and in evoking an emotional response. I'll have to read this several times to decide if it holds deep meaning or if it's an elaborate joke or something in between. Doesn't matter. I enjoyed it and will read whatever comes next. It's refreshing to find something unique in a sea of samness.

Posted 4 Years Ago



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