Nothing to Offer

What I want

Is nothing that you can give me

I want someone

Who will be my sholder to cry on

Who will be with me when I need it most

Who will let me call them just to say hi

Someone I need

To be there for me

Someone that will help me

With difficult challenges

All of this

Is

Nothing

You

Can offer

Nor

will I accept.

 

 

Reviews

[L.I. Black]

I really like this.
The raw emotion of it is very intriguing, kinda makes you want to know more about what is going on. Seems like it would make a wonderful piece of a story.
Great work.

[Jon Lattone]

I like the kind of ruthless desperation conveyed in this. Right from start to finish. Powerful and poignant. I like it, good work :)