Thank you... for listening.

i just want to thenk my friends on Writers Cafe for taking the time to share my thoughts and feelings

I’ve got a few confessions that

I’d like to get off my chest,

Will you sit here and listen?

 

My mind is like a car crash, a sudden

Accident and I’m the victim.

My thoughts disappear into a tragedy

Of skin peeling tyranny.

 

These words are a virus to the

Firewall of my psychoanalysis,

Penetrating a soft decaying barrier

Of human I used to be.

 

Flames blaze upon fading bliss,

Igniting hatred in a lost soul,

As my jealousy builds a pinnacle

At the center of my mind.

 

I’ve got a few confessions that

I’d like to get off my chest,

Will you sit here and listen?

 

Molten steel through slashes liquid flesh

At a speed I can’t comprehend,

As I’m knocked down with body

Fluids staining walls and flooding carpet.

 

I reminisce upon getting my teeth pulled

As shoe heels slam against my jaw,

I reminisce upon slavery when hit with

Extension cords,

 

I wish you really had burned me to death

That day, so I wouldn’t have to live

With lifeless sorrow that’s as useless

As a crib in the corner of a room, next to

A teenage girl with a bloody wire hanger.

 

 

I’ve got a few confessions that

I’d like to get off my chest,

Will you sit here and listen?

 

friends with luminescent writing

like the flow of oceanic brilliance sits,

With eyes glistening, ears open for listening,

To share my pain of reminiscing.

“I’ve got a few confessions that

I’d like to get off my chest,

Will you sit here and listen?”

 

Like a book, I share a history of

Sequential events. Thoughts stain like oil spills,

Drowning the idea of “happiness”

What does LOVE mean anymore?

 

You didn’t have to, but you did….

I had a few confessions that I had to get off my chest

Thank you, my friends at WritersCafe, for listening……

 

 I really do appreciate you guys….

 

 

Author's Note

hey guys, as you can tell most of my writings have been about my anger toward my dad, and i feel that i've gotten most of what i had to say off of my chest. I am currently out of inspiration, so this may be my last poem. but OH! this isnt a sad time at all! maybe one day i'll find something worth writing for again. but..... since i had'nt uploaded somethiing in a while, i thought i should give my thanks to those who have read and reviewed my poetry and to those who have felt along side me. i deeply appreciate the attention given in my time of need, . so, with this poem, i dedicate my thanks to you all ^_^

Reviews

[HopelesslyDevoted]

I hope you do post more soon, i enjoy your writings emensley and it would be a shame for such a fantastic writer like you to just quit.
i was think we could maybe collaborate on something, what do you think?
I'm not sure what we can write about yet, but we'll figure something out i'm sure of it. anything to keep our writing going. i have been feeling a little dead of inspiration lately too. maybe this is just what both of us need.
btw, this poem is awesome.
i know how you feel, as you can tell from some of my writings, my biological father and I don't get along either. i don't even talk to him.
sometimes the whole dad thing just doesn't work out, don't feel bad. it happens to a lot of people. and don't feel ashamed for writing out your anger. angry poems are the best! :) write to me if you want to brain storm

[The Flawed]

Very honest, great job
Keep writing,

[Quail]

I really like this one, it shows your comfort within us and beholds a truth that's told clearly through your words Nice Job man

[Ruth]

WOW! Now that is what I call a dedication lol
Your work always impresses me love! Always a pleasure to read you! Keep em rolling, hugs xx

[Victoria Thornton]

I like it. I wrote a poem like this once, it helped. I am honored to have read it.

~! Be Your Own Hero!~

[Kate Hunter]

nice job. the seventh stanza reminded me of the movie Forever Strong.
loved it. Keep writing!

[Kelsie Eileen Stark]

You are welcome! And I hope you find inspiration again, this thanks is apperciated~

[SabrinaThePoet]

you're welcome

[Dushyant Thadani]

The work was interesting and nice. And it was kind of you to thank all of us here.

[Jazique]

Awe thats was nice and it was nice to hear your confessesions to help you or you for us but, other words well done.