Disconnected

This is a VERY vaguely illustrated poem. people who know me would get it, but pay attention to key things. (what it is I'm seeking)

I may

I might

see some light

be so right

and see to the fight

 

The fight that binds us all

the fight that blinds us all

when theres no one left

then who do we call?

 

Inner intensions

effecting

outer dimensions

reflecting

unreal apprehentions

disconnecting

metephysical inventions

 

seeking to correct my screwed up thinking

I find myself trying to correct us

but

The truth IS the ship

it seems to be sinking

 

Seeking answers

to the extra layers of reality

poking wholes through normality

and finding a deeper spirituality

 

Who are you?

reconnect

what do you do?

reconnect

why have i been a fool?

reconnect

what do I do

reconnect

 

I shut up

connecting

you lead the way

 

connected

Reviews

[Christine]

I really like the flow to this poem, however this is my favorite stanza:

"Inner intentions
effecting
outer dimensions
reflecting
unreal apprehensions
disconnecting
metaphysical inventions"

I really love how you worked this. Great job.