A White Rose

Beauty rendering all to a hush,
Yet as sweet as an innocent blush,
Petals as soft as silk to my touch,
Upon her beauty I adore simply too much,
Petals as white as the clouds floating above,
Such a rose we all seek to humbly love,
A white rose of flawless perfection,
Upon her I shower adoring affection,
Hoping to hold close a beauty so true,
A blooming white rose such as you.

Reviews

[Sree]

wow, it is simply beautiful.

[Kelly Scheppers]

It's hard getting back into writing after a long absence. The best advice I could give is to simply ride it out. It will come back to you, trust me. Looking forward to reading more. Good to meet you, Xander. And welcome back!

[Lisasview]

Interesting first read of yours.
Enjoyed the read.
Funny because I just posted a poem called Ruby Red Blush and although different... in some ways is the same.
if you have the time perhaps you might want to take a look.
Lisa, now in Spain

[Ken e Bujold]

Welcome back to the fold Xander, from what I just read, the world's a better space for you having found your passion once more. Can't wait to see what lies beneath the surface

Ken e

[Nix is typing...]

I like this poem! I like the way you described the woman as a white rose, so cute but in so few words. Well written poem! 100/100

Nix