"B"

Trying this again. I think I like the challenge of the style, forcing me to blend my thoughts with imagery of select words.

Blustery breezes blowing blooming blue bonnets,

backdropped by barren but beautiful bluffs,

beaches battling blasting blackish brine

beauty-queen bewitched by breathtaking bounties,

but blessed by beauteous  beloved.

beloved by bashful brave beau. 

Author's Note

Is this a better ending than before?

Reviews

[Amy R]

wow, first time I've met a style like this and now I am inspired to challenge myself!
great style, loved it.
keep writing :) looking forward for more like this! :D
-Amy

[Xander West]

Thank you. I only wrote "A" for a alliteration contest...but I enjoy it...the challenge of being creative with words, but still portraying an image or story...I enjoy it immensely so I tried "B" and the "An Alliteration Love Affair". I think I like challenges.

[Amy R]

ur welcome, n who doesn't like challenges well idk about the rest, but i do! :)
i'll try some eventually!

[MissLaine]

Ohhh! Very fascinating. :) I love it~ Well written and I like how it flows so nicely.
Good challenge! ^^

[Xander West]

Thank you, but I want to work on the ending though.

[MissLaine]

ahh the last line? hmm yeah it could be changed. = )

[Xander West]

thanks.........

[Xander West]

beloved by blessed bashful brave beau. Better ending?

[MissLaine]

hmm that doesn't sound to fit.. like it doesn't feel like it flows..
hmm... do you have another one?

[Xander West]

All I have for now....I need some sleep. And I like the ending a posted better so far.

[MissLaine]

ahh i see. = ) well alright. Good night. And as long as you like it, then it should be good.

[Xander West]

ha ha....good enough. I was tired.

[MissLaine]

:) its alright~