The Bend of Astronomy to your Beauty

Taken up a challenge.....

The Bend of Astronomy to your Beauty

I'm drawn to your alluring beauty,

It's simply captivating, absolutely,

Capturing me way too damn soon,

Like the Earth's gravity of the moon.

How your beauty bends the laws of Astronomy,

Your figure like a goddess of mythology,

Bending the very laws of all light,

All of it shining upon you so bright.

Like the bright blue giants of Orion,

I feel like the hunter chasing the lion,

I'm terrified of your claws capable to bear,

Yet we only leap off the cliff if we dare.

You resemble the shining andromeda princess

How I would sacrifice so much for a single kiss,

All bowing down to the beauty of royalty,

Like the stars above you reign as a dynasty.

All in the universe works around you like circinus,

All astronomy bending to your angelic perfectness,

How I long for you as if you are my compass,

The presence of you announced by sounding trumpets.

Easily fulfilling the beauty of boastful Cassiopeia's claim,

For even the nereids bow and exclaim,

How laws of astronomy bend to your beauty,

I speak of all of this for eternity, so truly

Reviews

[MissLaine]

OMGOSH.. wow. This is so wonderfully written. Somehow it reminds me of like Shakespeare. Just the way you describe.. its very pleasing. Also very refreshing!
I hope whoever asked you to do this challenge is proud. :)

I believe its an excellent piece!

[Xander West]

Thank you. I spent more time researching than I did writing. However, it was a fun challenge.

[MissLaine]

haha really? = ) I see. mmhm. :) sounds fun indeed~

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

I enjoyed reading this awesome writing. I have to thank you for sharing this.