The Art of my Lover

Butterflies dancing along with the thoughts of my mind,

Emotions fluttering along with the pounding of my heart,

Your enticing eyes sparkling  as they look into mine,

If only my words could match the beauty of your art.

 

How your curves seduce even the canvass,

Painting a masterpiece with the sway of your hips,

Driving my charmed soul to near madness,

Craving to taste the sweetness of your lips.

 

How the brushes simply stroke by magic,

As the artist admires your angelic face,

Every feature is altogether fantastic,

Every alluring curve I wish to trace.

 

How your eyes bewitch the paints,

Leaving me under the spell of your romance,

All my thoughts tied down by your restraints,

Yet constantly flowing through an unending dance.

 

How your smile captivates the impression,

My heart daring to leap at the chance,

Your desires have become my sole obsession,

As I stumble along under your trance.

 

How the smoothness of your skin lures the portrait,

Your kindred spirit captures my every thought,

Rocketing my terrified heart into an orbit,

To retrieve the romance of the moon you so sought.

 

To express the beauty of my love

I have only scratched the surface,

I would have to capture all the beauty above,

So my love constantly leaves me wordless.

Reviews

[Angelia]

Love it! This piece reminds me of The scene on Titanic when Jack is drawing Rose. You definitely sound like your writing from a place of understanding which helps your audience capture the emotion in this poem. Keep up the good work! -Ang

[Xander West]

Thank you Ang.

[anne p. murray- LadeeAn..]

Ohhhhh so very beautiful, your words can melt hearts with their sweetness dear poet.

hugs
anne

[Xander West]

Thank you very much.

[Alucard6336]

Hey I like this. It's amazing in the word choice and flow. I think you might have a muse. Love is perfect, and people still do love reading about it. Great job. :)

[Xander West]

Ironic. Somebody simply told me to write something about astronomy or astrology...so this was the result within an hour of being requested. I spent the majority of the time researching constellations and astrology. I appreciate the compliments. I truly do.