A past lover

memories of us emotions run wild
time with him i felt like a child
happy and excited we'd kiss and play
talk on the phone all night and day
but that was the past, no longer here
looking at my face disregard my tear

Reviews

[Eagle Cruagh]

In six lines you run the gamut of
wild abandoned love, lust, then
the break-up, tears and heart ache.
You include the depth of feeling and
emotion that one finds in life.
Very well done
--- Eagle Cruagh

[patricia]

a picture portrait of what sounded realy special. nice write. enjoyed.