INTERGALACTIC EXPRESS

Fastest transportation in the entire Milky Way

Gliding through the stars

There is magic all around

Passing moons of Mars

Seeing sights and sounds

Cosmic colors crash and collide

Across a vivid neon sky

Exposing the dark silent and shy

Sharing the universe side by side

With illuminating light

And colors shining bright

A spectacle before our eyes

Gleaming in the night

Red rockets race

Blue blazes blaze

Purple planets play

While flying all the way

Nearing the end of line

We hear a clickety-clack

Waiting for number nine

Where we know we made it back

The whistle blows and a ringing bell

Over the intercom a last farewell

To those that rode I say God bless

Thanks for riding the I.G. Express

Reviews

[Joshua Marshall]

I really like this poem. It makes me think of the orient express on Doctor Who. It was a train in space.

[XVCrow]

Really? I think I'm going to have to just dive into Doctor Who. I've always been interested but have never tried getting into it.

[Joshua Marshall]

Some people like it, others don't. I'm one of the first group; I really enjoy the show.

[annalysiar]

I enjoyed this one too, it has a very well placed story in a few quick short words. Great imagery awesome write

[XVCrow]

You're too kind Anna, I hope to continue to see more writings from you as well

[annalysiar]

I will try to post new things... Its a matter of time. Thank you, buy I'm not kind, you just wrote great things 😉 thanks for sharing it was a pleasure to read

[Lauren_The_Awesome]

Very nice word play and imagery. Loved this poem :)

[XVCrow]

thank you Lauren

[Lauren_The_Awesome]

Your welcome :)

[Soma-ko]

A very quick tempo, and nicely chosen words! Nice job.

[XVCrow]

thank you Soma