Scars on my soul

Scars on my soul

A Poem by xXxAxDisastrousxScenexXx

Did i deserve it
to get the crap beaten out of me?
no, but i am thankful
i am now more the girl i have wanted to be

day after day, i hurt inside
but still i have fought and fought
against those cruel people who stabbed me
with words and never gave a second thought

They dont deserve a minute of my time
but inside they still damage me
they could just leave me the hell alone
and just let me be

they dont deserve a single tear of mine
or a quick moment of my long
and yet, somehow they still torture me
and just rip my peace away

i tell myself
dont let them win
but yet, they still scar me
from deep within

day after day, i hurt inside
but still i have fought and fought
against those cruel people who stabbed me
with words and never gave a second thought

the things they say
the simply cruel words they use
cut me deep
like invisable abuse

how is it, that without
a shout or scream
but with few soft words
they cut my self esteem

All and all, all they have put me through
i have kept the most improtant thing of all

i have kept who i am, loving gentle
completely me
and their words will never
make me fall

one day soon, the time will come
when they are the ones being hurt
then maybe they will see
all the scars they have left on me

© 2009 xXxAxDisastrousxScenexXx


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Ian
W... O... W! (�o�)
Awesome... wonderful... perfect!
Oh! I can relate this to a lot of stuff that has happened to me... I also can relate this to some of my writings... This is just perfect... so well written... I can feel your anger... or was it mine? haha...
I was wondering... is it a lyric?... because it seems...

"day after day, i hurt inside
but still i have fought and fought
against those cruel people who stabbed me
with words and never gave a second thought"

That sounds like an chorus... but that's just me... oh, well... just forget what I'm saying, I'm just crazy... hahhaha jk... okay back to the review...
Erm... I love this piece... this is one of my favorite!
Just wonderful.... Awesome work!!!! Keep it up!!! Aplausses and roses for you!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Ah! This is so beautifully sad and heartbreakingly beautiful!
This is so raw and emotionally powerful!
Loved it!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Ian
W... O... W! (�o�)
Awesome... wonderful... perfect!
Oh! I can relate this to a lot of stuff that has happened to me... I also can relate this to some of my writings... This is just perfect... so well written... I can feel your anger... or was it mine? haha...
I was wondering... is it a lyric?... because it seems...

"day after day, i hurt inside
but still i have fought and fought
against those cruel people who stabbed me
with words and never gave a second thought"

That sounds like an chorus... but that's just me... oh, well... just forget what I'm saying, I'm just crazy... hahhaha jk... okay back to the review...
Erm... I love this piece... this is one of my favorite!
Just wonderful.... Awesome work!!!! Keep it up!!! Aplausses and roses for you!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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