A Cutters Lullaby

I think it's well how do i say it....Really bad

Go to sleep,and close your eyes,

And dream of broken butterflies,
That tore their wings aginst a thorn,
You know the pain they have,
Silver metal shines so bright,
Scarlet blood, That feels so right,
Dream of blood trickling down,
And awake just before you drown,

The moonlight's shining off your tears,As you bleed out you worst fears,So tonight when you start to cry,Whisper the cutters lullaby:

Hush little baby  your almost dead,
You don't have a pulse and ,
Your pilliow's stained red,
Your family hates you,
And your friends let you bleed,
Sleep tight with a knife,
Cause it's all you need,

Rockabye baby,

broken and scared,

You didn't know life would be this hard,

Time to end the pain

,That you hid so well,And down will come baby,

Straight back to hell!

Reviews

[Kitty]

This is powerfully emotional poem. The images are so vivid and oh so true. This is a superb piece of writing.

Great job

Josie

[Sheila Kline]

Ah, story of the life of a "cutter".........so pained, so troubled, so out of control with the option of relieve the pain by self abuse.........I can relate!
Well done, though so very tragic that we come to a point such as this!!
Sheila

[DarkkxVoid]

Ok.........very.............morbid.....................it scared me but good poem..... goodness it is really disturbing though sorry but I just love this poem its really good seriously its really good but I really hope little kids don't read this because its just really morbid.