Act one: ramdonness.

Pimples on her face scars on he arms,

all little reminders of the self-inflict harm.

bald patches of hair,

chewwed off pen caps,

no worries, thats why pills are here

to fill in those little gaps.

dead by day

wasted by night,

i feel so off, and lost and bummed!

its like i`m marching to the beat of a diffrent drum.

it so frost and out of tune!

exceeds the expecations of no one,

and only seems to exclude gloom.

but thats why i`m here... to entertain you all,

i`m a missfit, a clown, a litte nutball.

drop in a quarter,

and you will see,

how sick

horrible

and demented

it is to be me.

 

(i only ask of you, no checks pleasee!) :P

 

Author's Note

....this is a little rhyme i wrote waaaaay back when i was like..13 or so. i found it in one of my old journals, and i just felt like sharing it, with you all! =D its abit ..weird, i know...but i thinks its a kinda catchy!!! ;D

Reviews

[Elrebmik™]

a dark, but fun piece. as everyone stated, it is catchy. it was an enjoyable read! awesome!

[ebur™]

this really was catchy. i found this sad, but at the same time jumpy and happy for some reason, because the sometimes the words and the exclamation marks lightened the mood if you understand what i mean. but overall it was an enjoyable read. great job! :)

[chloe cruz]

This was catchy, you're right! :] Yet, it was dark... emotional. A nice flow.

Chloe.

[nostal]

Very dark and good.
Nice job.

[~D.A. Phoenix~]

Hey there is nothing wrong with posting old stuff. It's a way to see how much you have grown as a writer. There isn't a thing weird about this piece. Is there any other way to express ourselves other than writing? I like this piece. It made me laugh. Reminded me of the things I wrote when I was 13. I'm not necessarily sure that's a good thing but it's all in interpretation. Keep writing. Check out my stuff if u get a chance...and yes it is catchy

~DA~