I set my friends on fire!! =D

I set my friends on fire!! =D

A Poem by XThe_happy_emoX
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....yehh...its pretteh disturbing folks. O_o

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I set my friends on fire,

oh, what a sight it was to see!

their burning bodies,flaming heads, and their high pitched, "Help Me`s!"..

i knew it was wrong...

twisted and vile.

but i couldnt help it,

i just needed to be alone for a while.

coverd in ashes, burned to a crisp!!

i nodded, and smiled , marking three names off my christmas list.

2 days after their horrified deaths,

i began to feel, sad, and lonely..

a huge side affect  wave of melancholy.

 but its ok..

doesnt matter,

their always be,

my BFF`S.

© 2008 XThe_happy_emoX


Author's Note

XThe_happy_emoX
DIS-TUR-BINGGG! =O i cantbelive i came up with such a sick, twisted piece of horror. just to be clear, I AM NOT A MENTAL FREAK! I LOVE MY FRIENDS DEARLY AND WOULD NEVER HURT THEM FOR ANY REASON AT ALL!!! this was just a little mindgame we were playing one day, and i just came up with it. they seemed to love it, and told me it would be a ggood idea to write it down..soo...here it is fur yehh!! :D enjoy, read, rate and comment///i ACCEPT AND KIND OF OPINION GOOD OR BAD!!!

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Cute rhyme for a suicide girls-type deal, but I wouldn't call this poetry...

Also, I get inspiration, but you sure seem to have taken 100% ISMFOF-name inspiration on this.

It's cute, but i'd change the name.
And I dunno how serious of a writer you really are, but if you're interested in understanding the craft, you should begin by probably removing numbers from your poems unless they are crucial to the idea. They don't really work well via-prose-to-sight.

And capital letters are nice.


Cute though, despite being horrifically genre-inspired.

Posted 14 Years Ago


hahahaha wow...glad to hear you wouldn't really do this..lol...i like it :p
Good Job

Posted 14 Years Ago


this was awesomely scary! (if that makes sense!) I luv it! ;P

Posted 14 Years Ago


i like this, not sick or vile, slightly disturbing, but not much disturbs me,
cept spiders
did you know theres actually a band called i set my friends on fire?

Posted 14 Years Ago


its awesome i wouldnt say disturbing but anywho im weird dont get me wrong i would never set my friends on fire either its just a great poem

Posted 15 Years Ago


This is the kind of thing I could find myself doing quite often :3

Posted 15 Years Ago


I love this!!!
This is totally my kind of poetry.
Amazing write... it made me laugh a little :P
-Elissa

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Hello everyonee! my name is ellie, i am 16 years old..and a dreamer!!! ^_^ writing is my true and only love!! but it is sometimes replaced by its jealous mistress, music and drawing XD....rainy days i.. more..

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