failed.

She wanted to dance,

but there was no music.

she wanted to sing,

but she had no voice.

she wanted to feel,

but she had no senses.

she wanted to fly,

but she had no wings.

she wanted to love,

but she had no heart.

she wanted to die,

so she sat down and cried.

she wanted to sleep,

but she could not dream,

she wanted to wake up,

but she never did.

she wanted to escape..

but she realized..

she couldnt` run from herself.

Author's Note

"ellie, ellie, ellie....just what are you thinking about today??"..**shakes head**
idk why wrote this..just another of my minds, "brilliant", creations...eh?? chyea right...idk..i thought it was pretty good, kinda not ryhiming, but what really matters is that i put a little bit of myself int this "poem", right?? so..it`s all good...umm..any comments?? suggestions?? ANYTHING IS GOLDEN!! thanks..<3

Reviews

[D. Nelson]

i thought it was good. i enjoyed reading it and the way the emotion seems to sort of sink lower and lower throughout the poem is great.

kudos =]