love, is what he said.

love, is what he said.

A Poem by XThe_happy_emoX

You`ve stayed too long.

it`s time to go.

you broke my heart.

i should have known.

you said you loved me.

you said you cared.

now here i stand,

in my despair.

you look at me

i look at you

you smile, "you`ve known i`m always true..",

i turn away. tears.pain. heartache.

"How could you!?".

"my love, how could i not..?".

Silence.

no one speaks. no one breaths.

Love doesn`t last forever,

especially when your only fifteen. </3

© 2008 XThe_happy_emoX


Author's Note

XThe_happy_emoX
i wrote this while i was at boarders...it just sorta popped outta y head, like, :huh?", lolz...i knowit`s abit short, but i would love to hear ur comments about it! i care deeply about ur opinion, so everybody please..!! any suggestions?? what did u think of it??? ALL COMMENTS ARE WELCOMED!! <3

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Ahaha My friend told me to read this.

100/100

Posted 14 Years Ago


I like that last line as well
This is a well expressed write here
Full of emotion

Posted 15 Years Ago


I'm fifteen too. I'm glad to find other writers to relate to.
The lines
' "How could you!?".
"my love, how could i not..?". ' really struck me.
Amazing poem.
-Elissa




Posted 15 Years Ago


I must agree with him, that last line was... In some way deep, should I say...
We teenagers come and love whatever stands in front of us, yet, we don't realize what's better for us, or who is real when nothing is...

Posted 16 Years Ago


I loved the last line! Gave it a slight sarcasm that really worked.

Nice flow to it, too, well mixed with the theme and the quick fire lines.

Great piece!

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Hello everyonee! my name is ellie, i am 16 years old..and a dreamer!!! ^_^ writing is my true and only love!! but it is sometimes replaced by its jealous mistress, music and drawing XD....rainy days i.. more..

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