Fall For You

Something random I wrote....:)

 

Usually we don’t argue, but I guess there’s first time for everything.

You yelling at me isn’t exactly how I wanted to spend tonight with you.

I’ve finally stopped yelling back and I’m just listening to all the things I do wrong.

It’s too hard for me to hold back all the tears your causing me, so I’ve let them go.

It’s been about 10 minutes and you’ve stopped yelling.

You’re watching me cry and I wish I could see what’s going on in your head.

Loving arms wrap around me and you pull me close to you, saying you’re sorry over and over again.

I forgive you. I’ll always forgive you, because I love you and you can’t change that.

Author's Note

Tell me if you like it, please ^-^

Reviews

[InkBlack]

I thought it was very well written and it kept my interest from beginning to end without my mind drifting off to foreign lands so yeah, that would be my definition of "liking it", actually, I loved it.

I have one question though, did this happen to you or a friend? or is it simply fiction? And if it is you, why do you love this person if they yell at you like that? I'm not saying you should do this because this poem is perfectly fine as it is, but maybe you could add why you love the person so much for their eyes? Smile? whatever. Just a suggestion, you don't have to listen to me.

[Helena]

I liked your "random" thoughts. Was it a "muse" write or "real life"

I hope it was a "muse" write because alarm bells went off in my
head when I read:

"Loving arms wrap around me and you pull me close to you,
saying you're sorry over and over again.I forgive you..."

Been there done that, and from experience it's very rarely
"verbal and emotional abusers" change. Just a few of my
"random thoughts" lol

Good write!

Helena

[shinybluestars03]

I can relate to this poem
when that someone says their "sorry"
but at that moment of arguement you dont want to hear that
their "sorry" you just want them to hold you and tell you that
everything will be okay and that they love you...
Thanks for sharing

Best wishes

[PasDeChat]

Nicely written. It happens too often in releationships. You penned it very well.

[Lynxter]

I love it! it kinda sounds like it could be a song. lol.