Critically Hit

Critically Hit

A Poem by Tomeka
"

Not my best,well wait what is my best???

"

Critically hit almost everyday

I might get better one day

Not today,I see everyone staring at me and wanting to stomp on me

I feel like hiding under a rock all the time

With you by my side, I might make it through the week without any obstacles

I don't think people will stop staring

It is getting the best of me

I can't let it get to me

Critically Hit everyday

© 2009 Tomeka


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Let them stare and keep them in suspense...it'll kill them not knowing. Especially when there efforts don't phase you. Great write! Keep up the great work!

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on May 13, 2009

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Tomeka
Tomeka

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