*Try and Cry*

*Try and Cry*

A Poem by Tomeka
"

Randomly wrote this.

"

I don't know why i try,when instead i cry
my feelings,my words,my wounds are all nothing
always trying,always crying
this fate is too real
im just holding on for something to feel
why try,when i cry?

© 2009 Tomeka


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Tomeka
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Leaves one to think in deep thought! Can feel the sentiment in this. Never give up trying, no matter how many tears may fall!

"my feelings,my words,my wounds are all nothing"

Very touching line! They are something, as you've proven with this piece. I see a Talent coming out to share with others their talents.

Posted 15 Years Ago


great potential, keep it up.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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