Underground

I believe it was angered.

As we knew it.

The struggling danger

that fell on us.

As we get buried

into the dry dust.

There, she lay

on the darker surface

with her hair in an ugly sway.

Underground

there i found

we were under a pile of dirt.

So shooken up

Partly gave up

She began to hurt.

she took a breath

and entered death.

She never came back

Therefore, i lacked

strength to protect.

Now, i reflect

the days we met

and the love she gave.

But, still she laid.

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Love this poem, the emotion is very welll expressed and it has a good flow to it. good job.