The Result

Face is hot

Hands are cold

Feelings hidden

Beneath the mold

I have no choice

I have to choose

It's easy to win

And hard to lose

What's crushing me most

Is what i have to pick

When I try to fight back

The pain comes too quick

The answer's there

So I close my eyes

I blackout the hatred

and all of the lies

The result is a gun

and a bit of blood

but the gun doesnt matter

because i'm already gone.

Reviews

[Sexy P3nguin]

Wow. I am like amazed. Your flow was amazing along with your emotion and story. But to get to the piont of this review. I must give deails. The way you wrote this, with the short lines full of deatails and the endiong was amazing.
Great job, thanks for entering and good luck. =]

[thisXgirlXcanXrawr(:]

So much emotion in this poem, very well written.

[writerholic]

wow. such a beautifull work of art and yet so sad. i like it.espically the ending.

[A]

Dark and morbid, but very well written. Especially the end, or, all of the lines after "The answers there". Those lines were superb. Nice work. =D